How about this:
Edible tubers, flayed, fragmented, and subsequently submerged in a seething emollient fluid, thus transmogrified into brittle sticks of a golden amber hue .
or as most of us know them better French Fries (or chips for the Brits)
Hopefully a humeros way of showing that beautiful prose, and a large vocabulary are not always helpful in communication.
Here at SFI we are trying to communicate in a practical sense, It does not need to flow like fine literature. Therefore:
Keep it simple,
Use short sentences.
If you are worried about stringing idea together, just use bullet points.
It helps if you are clear in your thinking and know exactly what it is you are trying to communicate before you start,
Just try.. it gets easier with practise
How about this:
Edible tubers, flayed, fragmented, and subsequently submerged in a seething emollient fluid, thus transmogrified into brittle sticks of a golden amber hue .
or as most of us know them better French Fries (or chips for the Brits)
Hopefully a humeros way of showing that beautiful prose, and a large vocabulary are not always helpful in communication.
Here at SFI we are trying to communicate in a practical sense, It does not need to flow like fine literature. ...more
