I wonder if you are not wording the ad correctly. Are you using enthusiastic words? It also depends what you are selling. Have ever done poetry? Do you know anyone who does? Do you like singing songs from the radio? Maybe if you borrow one or two lines from a song that has its copyright expired you could score big or use a rhyme from childhood days who knows? try that coupled with our S Builders! Better yet speak to an advertiser and ask him or her what you are doing wrong!
I must tell you advertising takes time, skill, wit, knowledge about the product and proper timing to get the ad just right. You might have to write it over and over again. Bounce it off friends and family, strangers and ask them if you heard an ad like this would it entice you to buy? Remember thinking out of the box is the key. I hope I have given you some ideas and you become super successful!
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I wonder if you are not wording the ad correctly. Are you using enthusiastic words? It also depends what you are selling. Have ever done poetry? Do you know anyone who does? Do you like singing songs from the radio? Maybe if you borrow one or two lines from a song that has its copyright expired you could score big or use a rhyme from childhood days who knows? try that coupled with our S Builders! Better yet speak to an advertiser and ask him or her what you are doing wrong!
